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1. I'm going to have Mike (look at) my computer to see what is wrong.

2. One of my wisdom teeth really hurt, so I went to the dentist (to have it removed).

3. Are you going to (allow him suffer) like this?

4. Jimmy is dead. The mafia boss (had killed).

5. Julie will not (let her daughter marry) the boy from across the street.
down) when I was renovating my apartment.

6. I had the (wall to be knocked down) when I was renovating my apartment.

7. I (made him call) her and apologize.

8. I have (had my heart broken) many times.

9. The authorities (had her to be deported) as soon as they found out she was there illegally.

10. I (had a tattoo to be done) on my lower back.

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Hello May,

I do believe that you are determined to enhance your abilities in English.

There were some mistakes but don't let those mistakes conquer your strength.

I hope that you will still continue to develop this way.

You can learn from this process.

See yourself as a person who will be successful. So don't pull yourself down I know you can do it! 
 ^.^ Just keep it up!!

T. Jeny


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>>Correct
1. I'm going to have Mike (look at) my computer to see what is wrong.
>>Correct
2. One of my wisdom teeth really hurt, so I went to the dentist (to have it removed).
>>Correct
3. Are you going to (allow him suffer) like this?
>>let him suffer
4. Jimmy is dead. The mafia boss (had killed).
>>had him killed
5. Julie will not (let her daughter marry) the boy from across the street.
down) when I was renovating my apartment.
>>Correct
6. I had the (wall to be knocked down) when I was renovating my apartment.
>> wall knocked down
7. I (made him call) her and apologize.
>>Correct
8. I have (had my heart broken) many times.
>>Correct
9. The authorities (had her to be deported) as soon as they found out she was there illegally.
>>had her deported
10. I (had a tattoo to be done) on my lower back.

>>had a tattoo done

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