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2023-03-13 430

회원님의 영작문

There are many people, including me, who want to improve their English skills. They have a variety of reasons to learn English. People want to have competitiveness when it comes to their career. As we are living in a globalized society, improving English skills is useful skills in our society. For example, one of my friend works in the global company. He has a good English skill, because he lived in Sanfransisco for 8 years. When he had the job interview, he received good reviews because he had fluent English skills.
Also, people want to learn English to have more opportunities to communicate with more people. Since English is a common language in the world, we can talk with more people in the world in English. For instance, when we go travel to foreign contries, we can talk to people with English. Even if there are people who do not speak in English, they can answer and indicate a bit of English words. These are the reasons why people want to improve their English skills.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day Olivia^^


It's tough to have big responsibilities, but that's what makes life.
We have to be strong enough for our responsibilities.
Anyway, enjoy your day.
I'll see you!!

T. Jeny


There are many people, including me, who want to improve their English skills. 
>>correct
They have a variety of reasons to learn English.
>>correct
 People want to have competitiveness when it comes to their career. 
>> People want to have competitiveness when it comes to their careers. 
As we are living in a globalized society, improving English skills is useful skills in our society. 
>>As we are living in a globalized society, improving English skills is a useful skill in our society. 
For example, one of my friend works in the global company. 
>>For example, one of my friends works in a global company. 
He has a good English skill, because he lived in San Francisco for 8 years.
>>He has good English skills because he lived in San Francisco for 8 years.
 When he had the job interview, he received good reviews because he had fluent English skills.
>>correct
Also, people want to learn English to have more opportunities to communicate with more people. 
>>correct
Since English is a common language in the world, we can talk with more people in the world in English. 
>>correct
For instance, when we go travel to foreign contries, we can talk to people with English. 
>>For instance, when we go travel to foreign countries, we can talk to people in English. 
Even if there are people who do not speak in English, they can answer and indicate a bit of English words. 
>>Even if there are people who do not speak English, they can answer and indicate a few English words. 
These are the reasons why people want to improve their English skills.
>>correct
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