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Would you like it to be spring forever?

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HOMEWORK:
[Creative Writing] Would you like it to be spring forever? Why or why not? Kindly answer in 3 to 5 sentences.

I don¡¯t like to be spring forever.
It¡¯s because weather of spring is often change.
In morning is very cold but It is become warm at 3:00 from 1:00P.M.
I don¡¯t know What to wear clothes.
But I love flowers which bloom beautiful in spring.

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Hi there, Daisy! ^^,)

During the year, we can notice steady change in our surroundings. The occurrence of flowers and fruits on trees and plants, variations in animal activity, agricultural and industrial activities, and human eating habits are all influenced by the earth's seasons.

Due of the importance of each season to us, it is impossible for us to survive in a world with only one season.

Thank you so much for this composition. See you tomorrow!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I don¡¯t like to be spring forever.
It¡¯s because weather of spring is often change.
>>> I don't want it to be spring forever.
It's because the temperature in spring often changes.
In morning is very cold but It is become warm at 3:00 from 1:00P.M.
>>> It is very cold in the morning, but it begins to warm up from 1:00 p.m. to 3:00 p.m.
>>> OR: The temperature drops dramatically in the morning but starts to rise around 1:00 p.m. to 3:00 p.m.
I don¡¯t know What to wear clothes.
But I love flowers which bloom beautiful in spring.
>>> I don't know what clothes to wear anymore, but I love seeing flowers bloom in the spring.
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