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Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!

~ T. Lexie


computer: The computer is addictive.
>> GOOD!
useful: Computer useful our life.
>> The computer is useful to our lives.
technology: Popular Korea technology is make smartphone.
>> One popular Korean technology is smartphone.
internet: I use internet a lot of the day.
>> I use the internet a lot everyday.
research: To the technology the computer research.

>> The computer technology helps us in research.

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