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Should chewing gums be prohibited/banned in your country? Why or why not?

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No. It's because we don't have to do it. I can't understand why our country should banned to eat chewing gum. It is not bad behavior. And if we ban to eat chewing gum, someone who likes to eat chewing gum will feel sad and they can't understand why they have to follow this rule. I think it is little bit strange.

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Hi, Daisy. :)
Thank you for taking the time to answer this question. 
I think some countries ban chewing gums because they're difficult to clean or dispose. 
Anyhow, as long as people know how to properly dispose or throw them away, there's no reason for the government to ban it. 
I hope you're having an awesome day. 
See you later. ^_^
~Teacher Charry

No. 
>> No, it shouldn't be prohibited/banned. 
It's because we don't have to do it. 
>> CORRECT!
I can't understand why our country should banned to eat chewing gum. 
>> I can't understand why our country should ban people from eating a chewing gum. 
It is not bad behavior. 
>> It is not a bad behavior. 
And if we ban to eat chewing gum, someone who likes to eat chewing gum will feel sad and they can't understand why they have to follow this rule. 
>> If we ban eating a chewing gum, someone who likes to eat a chewing gum will feel sad and won't understand why he/she has to follow this rule. 
I think it is little bit strange.
>> I think it is a little/bit strange.
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