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Hi.
As expected, I had a hectic day, especially because of hangover.
Until lunchtime, I couldn't be awake clearly.
However, we achieved a higher income in this morning.
There was a bad thing.
Our male staff resigned.
Thus, we interviewed another man.
He is 51 years old and seemed to be gentle, smart, and professional.
He got paid so high in the previous work place.
So, Dr.MJ and I considered if we chose the man or not.
After enough discussion, we decided to let him join our clinic.
We offered him high salary that he got paid before, and he accepted with a gratitude.
Meanwhile, a cleaning staff is cleaning our clinic.
I can see what she is doing on my CCTV monitor.
She is working so hard.
We contracted that she works two hours per day, however, she is working about three hours today.
She seems to have a responsibility and pride about her work.
Today, I will not drink.
This is my drink free day.
Now I should see her and let her go.
And, I will go home by my red car.
See you tomorrow.

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Good morning again, Dr. Kim!

Time is the only sure cure for a bad hangover. Apparently, a good profit definitely can make your hangover disappear faster! 

Lately, these young adults have sought different types of career where they have a lot more flexibility and control.Since they are young, they can hop from one job to another. They have time to do this. Well, as I said before, we cannot stop them. According to research, employees who are 40 years old and older are the most engaged and demonstrate the highest level of organizational commitment, and that those 50 years old and older are the most satisfied with their jobs. This means that as we grow older, the more committed to work we become. Hope that the 51-year old new member stays fora long time. Finally, I guess you are very lucky to find a sanitation staff! Treat them well like a family.

Your composition showed so many correct sentences, well done! Always use the correct preopositions, and take note when to use 'a' or when not to use it in sentences. Excellent job!

Have a blast this weekend at work!

-T. Donna~

Hi.
>> Correct!

As expected, I had a hectic day, especially because of hangover.
>> Correct!

Until lunchtime, I couldn't be awake clearly.
>> Correct!

However, we achieved a higher income in this morning.
>> Correct!

There was a bad thing.
>> Correct!

Our male staff resigned.
>> Correct!

Thus, we interviewed another man.
>> Correct!

He is 51 years old and seemed to be gentle, smart, and professional.
>> Correct!

He got paid so high in the previous work place.
>> Correct!

So, Dr.MJ and I considered if we chose the man or not.
>> Correct!

After enough discussion, we decided to let him join our clinic.
>> Correct!

We offered him high salary that he got paid before, and he accepted with a gratitude.
>> We offered him high salary that he got paid before, and he accepted with gratitude

Meanwhile, a cleaning staff is cleaning our clinic.
>> Correct!

I can see what she is doing on my CCTV monitor.
>> Correct!

She is working so hard.
>> Correct!

We contracted that she works two hours per day, however, she is working about three hours today.
>> We contracted that she works two hours per day, however, she is working for about three hours today.

She seems to have a responsibility and pride about her work.
>> Correct!

Today, I will not drink.
>> Correct!

This is my drink free day.
>> Correct!

Now I should see her and let her go.
>> Correct!

And, I will go home by my red car.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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