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s it easy to travel around your country? Why do you say so?

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2023-03-09 735

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It’s easy to travel around Korea because facilities needed to travel around, such as roads. accommodations and services relating to travel are good here. For example, we can go easily anywhere we haven’t been before helped by navigation. While we’re moving to your destination, we can book a hotel, or motel to stay overnight. Nowadays, thanks to Naver blogs on trips, we can get much information about it in advance. And above all, now we have a good transportation system and roads with which we can go anywhere in Korea within a day. Therefore, there is no need to worry about traveling to new places or far-away places.

Recently, our government is said to conduct a pilot operation of drone taxes in Jeju Island before expanding it to all regions in Korea. I bet we have better transportation like commercialized driverless vehicles in the future so that we can get around more easily. Maybe, whatever humans can imagine will come true before our very eyes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Here's your edited composition, Steve. 
I appreciate your sending it. Happy weekend! 

Cheers,
Jean~~




                Is it easy to travel around your country? Why do you say so?

It’s easy to travel around Korea because facilities needed to travel around, such as roads. accommodations and services relating to travel are good here. 
>> Traveling around the country is rather trouble-free since the infrastructure, facilities, and services related to traveling are fairly decent. 

For example, we can go easily anywhere we haven’t been before helped by navigation. 
>> OR: For instance, with the help of navigation, it's possible to go anywhere we haven't been to. 

While we’re moving to your destination, we can book a hotel, or motel to stay overnight. 
>> OR: In transit to our destination, we can book a hotel or motel for an overnight stay. 

Nowadays, thanks to Naver blogs on trips, we can get much information about it in advance. 
>> OR: Travel blogs and vlogs on Naver have been popularized in these times, which make advanced information-gathering easier. 

And above all, now we have a good transportation system and roads with which we can go anywhere in Korea within a day. 
>> OR: And to a great extent, the ease of travel is primarily the result of the increased connectivity through well-maintained roads making Korea easily accessible to everyone. 

Therefore, there is no need to worry about traveling to new places or far-away places.
>> OR: For this reason alone, traveling to new or even remote corners of the country is no longer an issue or a cause for concern. 

Recently, our government is said to conduct a pilot operation of drone taxes in Jeju Island before expanding it to all regions in Korea. 
>> Recently, our government is said to have conducted the test flight of drone taxis in Jeju Island and plans to commercialize air taxi services in the coming years. 

I bet we have better transportation like commercialized driverless vehicles in the future so that we can get around more easily. 
>> OR: This would no doubt revolutionize transportation and make electrically powered vehicles more widely used and available, which in turn would create a travel-friendly Korea. 

Maybe, whatever humans can imagine will come true before our very eyes.
>> OR: I image even impossible visions of humans in the course of time would be actualized. 
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