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Hello, T.Donna.
In fact, I really had a hectic day.
We can discuss tomorrow.
I am druken now.
See you tomorrow.

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Hello, Dr. Kim!

How do you feel right now? I hope you are sober and your hangover is totally gone. 

We have read and learned the ill effects of alcohol yet, we still consume it. Last night made you extra drunk and your actions were hard to control. I cannot blame you for having too much stress from work. I suggest, find a different hobby before sleeping like working out before going to bed. You can limit your alcohol intake as well as build a strong physical strength. Of course, these are better said than done. ^^

Then, if you drink a light to moderate amount and you're healthy, you can probably continue as long as you drink responsibly. Be sure to check with your doctor about what's right for your health and safety. I am sure you have many doctor friends to consult with your liver. I must say, I support your mild alcohol intake three times a week. Starting a big change in your consumption is the hardest part, but, you can do it for your daughters and your wife.

Thank you for sending this message! Please read one suggestion I made on your fourth sentence. 

Have a great day!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

In fact, I really had a hectic day.
>> Correct!

We can discuss tomorrow.
>> Correct!

I am druken now.
>> I'm drunk now.

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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