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[Writing Exercise] Name at least three (3) things that make you happy.

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[Writing Exercise] Name at least three (3) things that make you happy. Kindly explain your answer in 3-5 sentences.

What makes me happy?

First, It was make me happy to play with my friend.
When I played with my friend, I always got energy.

Second, It was make me happy to succeeded my goals.
When I succeeded my goal , I felt to proud of myself

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Hello, Daisy!

The most precious things are free of charge. This proverb conveys the idea that free things like family and friends shouldn't take precedence over expensive things. In the end, those free things are more valuable than anything money could purchase.

Thank you so much for doing your homework.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


What makes me happy?
>>> CORRECT
First, It was make me happy to play with my friend.
When I played with my friend, I always got energy.
>>> First, it made me happy to play with my friend.
When I played with my friend, I always had energy.
Second, It was make me happy to succeeded my goals.
When I succeeded my goal , I felt to proud of myself
>>> Second, it made me happy to achieve my goals.
I was overjoyed when I accomplished my goal.
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