¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

[Writing Exercise] Name at least three (3) things that make you happy.

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹Ú*¿¬
2023-03-08 219

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

[Writing Exercise] Name at least three (3) things that make you happy. Kindly explain your answer in 3-5 sentences.

What makes me happy?

First, It was make me happy to play with my friend.
When I played with my friend, I always got energy.

Second, It was make me happy to succeeded my goals.
When I succeeded my goal , I felt to proud of myself

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Daisy!

The most precious things are free of charge. This proverb conveys the idea that free things like family and friends shouldn't take precedence over expensive things. In the end, those free things are more valuable than anything money could purchase.

Thank you so much for doing your homework.^^

__T. Mayleen :)


What makes me happy?
>>> CORRECT
First, It was make me happy to play with my friend.
When I played with my friend, I always got energy.
>>> First, it made me happy to play with my friend.
When I played with my friend, I always had energy.
Second, It was make me happy to succeeded my goals.
When I succeeded my goal , I felt to proud of myself
>>> Second, it made me happy to achieve my goals.
I was overjoyed when I accomplished my goal.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
126211 What are some of the advantages of cooking your meals at home?... ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-04 4
126210 If you were a precious stone (example: ruby, diamond, jade),... ¹è*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-04 154
126209 Discuss On-site Plan of Action ±è*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 144
126208 Release date ±è*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 1
126207 Laptop issue ±è*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 2
126206 homework 03.03 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 215
126205 If I had $3,000 to improve my home, I would¡¦ ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 138
126204 Homework ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 124
126203 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 122
126202 homework ½Å*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 2
126201 Hw ÃÖ*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 124
126200 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 124
126199 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 113
126198 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 4
126197 Homework ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 1
126196 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 1
126195 Answer : What do you think is the best game of all time? Á¤*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 229
126194 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 0
126193 My favorite food Áö* ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 1
126192 homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2023-03-03 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04