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Do schools do enough to prevent bullying? Why or why not?

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I think every school think bullying is very bad behavior so they try to prevent it. Also some student did bullying so if student's parents hear it, the image of the school will be decrease and many student will not go to this school. So I think every schools are trying to prevent bullying, but also it need to respond if some student did bullying.

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Hi, Daisy. 
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay question. 
It is true that bullying is heinous act and should be condemned. 
You're right when you said the school personnel should act appropriately and promptly in controlling school bullies. 
 I hope you're sleeping well my dear. 
See you again in class tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher Charry

I think every school think bullying is very bad behavior so they try to prevent it. 
>> I think every school thinks bullying is a very bad behavior so they try to prevent it. 
Also some student did bullying so if student's parents hear it, the image of the school will be decrease and many student will not go to this school. 
>> Also, when some students bully other students and their parents hear about it, the image of the school will be tainted and many student will not want to go to this school. 
So I think every schools are trying to prevent bullying, but also it need to respond if some student did bullying.
>> So, I think every school is trying to prevent bullying, but it also needs to respond appropriately if some students do bullying.
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