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Hi there, Demi!

My apologies for not being able to take your class today. Like what I mentioned yesterday, there is a scheduled power interruption today, and I was hoping to still have the class by using my data, but it seems that everyone in the area was doing the same thing, which made it impossible for me to connect. Once again, I beg your pardon for that.
Anyway, here's your edited composition. Thanks for sending it. Catch you tomorrow!  

Cheers,
Jean~~




                   Do you enjoy meeting new people?

Honestly, I am a little introverted person. 
>> OR: To tell you the truth, I'm somewhat unsociable. 

So I am likely to feel shy to meet new people. 
>> OR: This makes me rather reserved when meeting people for the first time. 

But once I get to know them, afterward, I became to be quite talkative and active. 
>> That said, I can still let go of my social inhibitions given time and after I become more comfortable with new acquaintances. 
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