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Why do you think some people love to watch horror/thriller movies?

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I don't think all of the people love to watch horror or thriller movies. But some people love to do it. It's because some people it is fun or other feels pleasure by watching horror or thriller movies. Also many couples loves to watch those movies because they can touch because it is so scary or some people watch it for try to relieve stress in the summer.

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Hi, Daisy. ^_^
I hope you're having an awesome Tuesday. Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay question. 
I am not a big fan of horror or thriller movies because I sometimes dream about them. 
Do you love horror or thriller movies? 
Anyhow, please stay happy and I'll see you again in class later. ^_^
~Teacher Charry


I don't think all of the people love to watch horror or thriller movies. 
>> I don't think all people love to watch horror or thriller movies. 
But some people love to do it. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because some people it is fun or other feels pleasure by watching horror or thriller movies. 
>> It's because for some people, it is fun while others feel pleasure from watching horror or thriller movies. 
Also many couples loves to watch those movies because they can touch because it is so scary or some people watch it for try to relieve stress in the summer.
>> Also, many couples love to watch those movies because they can run for comfort to their partners because they are so scary to watch. While some people watch them to try to relieve their stresses in the summer.
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