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I prefer stay at home and take a rest to go out for the weekends. Because I want to reserve my energy for next week. Staying at home, I read books or watch TV then.
But, sometimes I go to drive to suburbs with my parents or boyfriend. I and my boyfriend like to go to the beaches. We didn't go out for winter, but as the weather is getting warmer, we plan to do some activities outdoor like riding a bicycle and climbing a mountain.

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Thank you for your answer, Jiyoung! :) I agree that it feels great to stay at home most of the time during weekends, especially after a tiring week from work. I remembered your interest in scuba diving and the beaches, so it's great to know that you have a significant other that shares the same interests as you~ I think it's very cute. (❁¢¥◡`❁)
~T.Harmony <3

I prefer stay at home and take a rest to go out for the weekends. 
>> I prefer to stay at home and take a rest instead of going out on the weekends.
Because I want to reserve my energy for next week. 
>> CORRECT!
Staying at home, I read books or watch TV then.
>> While staying at home, I read books or watch TV.
But, sometimes I go to drive to suburbs with my parents or boyfriend. 
>> CORRECT!
I and my boyfriend like to go to the beaches. 
>> My boyfriend and I like to go to the beaches.
We didn't go out for winter, but as the weather is getting warmer, we plan to do some activities outdoor like riding a bicycle and climbing a mountain.
>> We didn't go out during wintertime, but since the weather is getting warmer, we plan on doing some outdoor activities like riding a bicycle and climbing a mountain.
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