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Describe an important gift you have, tell us why it is important.

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My important gift I have is my family.
Because I feel happy and love thanks to them.
By being always next to me, they give me strength and stability.
I think they are the best present in my life.

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Hello Jenna! I couldn't agree more. It is because our family is the one that we can love and trust. Our family helps use through thick and thin. They also help push us up the ladder of life. I will see you in class. Take care always!~ T. Lyn
My important gift I have is my family.
>>The most important gift I have is my family.
Because I feel happy and love thanks to them.
>>It is because I feel happy and loved thanks to them.
By being always next to me, they give me strength and stability.
>>My family's presence and for always being by my side always gives me strength and stability. 
I think they are the best present in my life.
>>Correct. I consider them as the best present in my life.
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