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My first English diary

작성자: 이*영
2023-03-06 407

회원님의 영작문



Today is my first English class with T.Caitlyn.
I am so nervous because I'm not good at speaking and hearing English.
When i was young, I learned English.
For the first time, when I learned english, i think I am a 3rd grade student in elementary school.
I have studied English for many years.
I have learned English until I graduated my university as far as I can remember.
Unfortunately, I don't have an apportunity to speak English.
I think this is a problem which many koreans have about lauguage (especially English.)
We always have learend English to enter the university.
But these days many people know the importance to speak English well as well as to write English.
And many company require people who speak english fluently.
In my case, I don't need to speak English so far.
but nowdays thins have changed. I will have to go to Uganda about 2-3times yearly for work.
So I have to learn English. I will try to my best!
I believe that the Lord who created the language will give me wisdom

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Elizabeth.
It was nice to see your picture with the people in Uganda. English will definitely help you communicate with people from other countries and I hope that your work as a missionary will help not only the people in Uganda, but also those living in other poor countries.
- T. Caitlyn
Today is my first English class with T.Caitlyn.
>> CORRECT
I am so nervous because I'm not good at speaking and hearing English.
>> I am so nervous because I'm not good at speaking and listening in English.
When i was young, I learned English.
>> I learned English when I was young.
For the first time, when I learned english, i think I am a 3rd grade student in elementary school.
>> I think I was in third grade when I first learned English.
I have studied English for many years.
>> CORRECT
I have learned English until I graduated my university as far as I can remember.
>> As far as I can remember, I learned English until I graduated from university.
Unfortunately, I don't have an apportunity to speak English.
>> Unfortunately, I don't have an opportunity to speak English.
I think this is a problem which many koreans have about lauguage (especially English.)
>> I think this is a problem that many Koreans have about language, especially English.
We always have learend English to enter the university.
>> We always have to learn English to enter the university.
But these days many people know the importance to speak English well as well as to write English.
>> But these days, many people know the importance of speaking as well as writing in English.
And many company require people who speak english fluently.
>> Also, many companies look for people who speak English fluently.
In my case, I don't need to speak English so far.
>> CORRECT
but nowdays thins have changed. 
>> But nowadays things have changed. 
I will have to go to Uganda about 2-3times yearly for work. So I have to learn English.
>> I will have to go to Uganda twice or thrice a year for work so I have to learn English.
I will try to my best!
>> I will try my best!
I believe that the Lord who created the language will give me wisdom.
>> CORRECT
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