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I love a person who is very industrious because it can push me to do something hard. Sometimes people might tend to be lazy including you Hahaha. But the diligent people try to find what they will do. Whether it's suitable or not, they just try it.

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Happy Monday to you, Elic! Education is the most powerful weapon, which you can use to change the world. Great things are done by a series of small things brought together. You get the best out of others when you give the best of yourself. 

I love a person who is very industrious because it can push me to do something hard. 
>> I love an industrious person because he/she can motivate me to work hard.
Sometimes people might tend to be lazy including you Hahaha.
>> Sometimes people tend to be lazy, including you. Hahaha.
But the diligent people try to find what they will do.
>> But, diligent people always try to find something to do.
Whether it's suitable or not, they just try it.
>> Whether they like it or not, they just give it a try.
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