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작성자: 김*우
2023-03-02 694

회원님의 영작문

Hi.
As expected, I had a hectic day.
In fact, there were not too many clients.
However, because we didn't get used to our new hospital, we couldn't do our best in worktime.
Fortunately, many patients who came to our clinic told us that they were very satisfied with the interior of the clinic.
Regarding my homework, I like two rooms.
One is a restroom.
I can go to my toilet anytime.
And, the other is the pole room, as you can guess.
I used this pole around 20 times today.
It gave me a fatigue of my muscles, but I enjoyed it.
Meanwhile, there was a bad thing.
It was about our chief manager who are supposed to quit this month.
Two managers wanted to resign, because a chief manager told them unkindly.
Our chief manager does her work very well, but she can't have a good manner to others.
Hence, I told her not to do works which were related to other staff.
She had a bad attitude to other staff before, so I tried to correct her defect.
But, I failed in the end.
I should go to bed.
See you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Dr. Kim!


Expect your adjustment to take a while. Typically, it takes anywhere from a week to months to get past that “dazed” feeling— and, in complex jobs like yours, working in a variety of spaces also has its downsides and advantages. Right now, you have to deal with your sore muscles to fill in your overflowing bounty in your bank accounts! ^^


When it comes to impressing clients, office design is hugely important. It isn’t simply a case of providing great products and services, you also need to think about how you are showcasing the business. It takes no time at all for someone to make up their mind on your business, so you’ll want to make a good first impression. As it isn’t always easy to show off your products and services immediately, your office design plays a big part. When someone walks into the business for the first time all of their initial thoughts should be positive and impressive, as it’s hard to change them. You've done very well in this part.


Dealing with a difficult coworker is a delicate matter. You have the right to a peaceful work environment and the right to speak up for yourself as a CEO. Do what you must to keep the peace.


A few comments I made are about correct prepositions, subject-verb agreement, and pluralization.  So, thank you for this excellent analytical process you do for your clinic and work all the time. 


Have a happy weekend at work!


-T. Donna~

 

Hi.

>> Correct!

As expected, I had a hectic day.

>> Correct!


In fact, there were not too many clients.

>> Correct!


However, because we didn't get used to our new hospital, we couldn't do our best in worktime.

>> Correct!


Fortunately, many patients who came to our clinic told us that they were very satisfied with the interior of the clinic.

>> Correct!


Regarding my homework, I like two rooms.

>> Correct!


One is a restroom.

>> Correct!


I can go to my toilet anytime.

>> Correct!


And, the other is the pole room, as you can guess.

>> Correct!


I used this pole around 20 times today.

>> Correct!

 

It gave me a fatigue of my muscles, but I enjoyed it.

>>  It gave me a fatigue on my muscles, but I enjoyed it.

 

Meanwhile, there was a bad thing.

>> Correct!


It was about our chief manager who are supposed to quit this month.

>> It was about our chief manager who is supposed to quit this month.

Two managers wanted to resign, because a chief manager told them unkindly.

>>  Two managers wanted to resign, because a chief manager spoke to them unkindly.


Our chief manager does her work very well, but she can't have a good manner to others.

>> Correct!


Hence, I told her not to do works which were related to other staff.

>> Hence, I told her not to do work which were related to the other staff.

She had a bad attitude to other staff before, so I tried to correct her defect.

>> Correct!


But, I failed in the end.

>> Correct!


I should go to bed.

>> Correct!


See you.

>> Correct!

 
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