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I visited the district office this morning, because I had to report that I don't use pcx anymore. (pcx= my honda scooter bike). Fortunately there were not many people waiting, so I finished everything within 5 mins. To fill up the paper, and remove the number plate is what I needed to do to declare my stopping using the bike.
Yesterday I went to self-car wash shop to wash my bike, in order to take good photos of the bike. And I uploaded the pictures on several secondhand bike websites. I've already gotten couple of short messages and phone calls but most of them don't seem like really willing to buy it. Hopefully this bike could be sold within this month, so that I don't need to take care about these annoying phone calls any more.
This is not my first time to sell my bike, but it is always a headache work because most of people try to negotiate the price and some people ask for too much discount. I hope good person get this good bike. :)

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Good day, Miss Min!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


I visited the district office this morning, because I had to report that I don't use pcx anymore. 
>> I visited the district office this morning, because I had to report that I don't use PCX anymore (PCX= my Honda scooter bike). 
Fortunately there were not many people waiting, so I finished everything within 5 mins. 
>> CORRECT!
To fill up the paper, and remove the number plate is what I needed to do to declare my stopping using the bike.
>> To fill up the paper and to remove the number plate are what I needed to do to declare my stopping using the bike.
Yesterday I went to self-car wash shop to wash my bike, in order to take good photos of the bike. 
>> CORRECT!
And I uploaded the pictures on several secondhand bike websites. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Also, I uploaded the pictures on several secondhand bike websites. 
I've already gotten couple of short messages and phone calls but most of them don't seem like really willing to buy it. 
>> CORRECT!
Hopefully this bike could be sold within this month, so that I don't need to take care about these annoying phone calls any more.
>> CORRECT!
This is not my first time to sell my bike, but it is always a headache work because most of people try to negotiate the price and some people ask for too much discount. 
>> CORRECT!
I hope good person get this good bike. :)
>> CORRECT!

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