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Hello.
How are you doing?
As expected, I had hectic days.
Last Tuesday, my clinic moved to new building.
Can you imagine that situation?
Around 40 people, including my staff and moving company staff, did many things.
I almost passed out.
As I think of the date, last tuesday was just yesterday.
I can't believe it.
After all staff left the clinic, Dr. MJ and I invited some of our friends, and we enjoyed the barbecue in our terrace together.
That meat tasted amazing.
Maybe, we did a hard work all day, so we felt in that way.
Today, Dr. MJ and I came to our clinic in spite of the holiday.
We tried to correct any defects, because we have to see patients tomorrow.
You know what?
I am so nervous now.
I tried to avoid any bad thoughts, but it didn't work.
I guess I can get over this pressure feeling tomorrow.
Anyway, there was a good thing.
After caculating the last month's finance, I realized that we achieved the best income ever.
To handle money matters, I will just try to make more money.

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Hi there, Dr. Kim!

It takes a lot of hard work, money, and patience to construct something like this. I wish that all that pays off and you can lead a life of prosperity. Many congratulations from me! You must be busy arranging everything and getting it all arranged to get it going for a few more days. Eveyone you love is proud of your hard work and heartily hope that it all pays off for you. Hope you get all the success you deserve. As for now, a long list of work awaits you so stay laser- focused.

As I said, the ability to adapt to change is not a talent everyone possesses, even if it has become more important for companies. So, anticipate moer changes. The first few weeks of any new clinic may be difficult. Just move forward and pay attention to details.

I appreciate this composition even if you slept late and spent many hours of work. The suggestions were underscored for your convenience. 

See you soon!

-T. Donna~

Hello.
>> Correct!

How are you doing?
>> Correct!

As expected, I had hectic days.
>> Correct!

Last Tuesday, my clinic moved to new building.
>> Last Tuesday, my clinic moved to a new building.

Can you imagine that situation?
>> Correct!

Around 40 people, including my staff and moving company staff, did many things.
>> Correct!

I almost passed out.
>> Correct!

As I think of the date, last tuesday was just yesterday.
>> As I think of the date, I thought last Tuesday was just yesterday.

I can't believe it.
>> Correct!

After all staff left the clinic, Dr. MJ and I invited some of our friends, and we enjoyed the barbecue in our terrace together.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

That meat tasted amazing.
>> Correct!

Maybe, we did a hard work all day, so we felt in that way.
>> Maybe, we did hard work all day, so we felt that way.

Today, Dr. MJ and I came to our clinic in spite of the holiday.
>> Correct!

We tried to correct any defects, because we have to see patients tomorrow.
>> Correct!

You know what?
>> Correct!

I am so nervous now.
>> Correct!

I tried to avoid any bad thoughts, but it didn't work.
>> Correct!

I guess I can get over this pressure feeling tomorrow.
>> Correct!

Anyway, there was a good thing.
>> Correct!

After caculating the last month's finance, I realized that we achieved the best income ever.
>> After calculating last month's finance, I realized that we achieved the best income ever.

To handle money matters, I will just try to make more money.
>> Correct!

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