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Answer : How do you know if someone is a true friend?

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When he say his secret to me, I feel that we are more familiar.
Of course, the time knowing each other is important.
Normally, when we was student of high school, true friends may be came in my country.
how about your country?

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Yes, it also the case in our country. Some of my friends today are the same people I met when I was in high school~ (^・¥ø・^ ) 
~T.Harmony <3

When he say his secret to me, I feel that we are more familiar.
>> When he says his secret to me, we become more familiar with each other.
Of course, the time knowing each other is important.
>> Of course, the time we've known each other is important.
Normally, when we was student of high school, true friends may be came in my country.
>> Normally, when we were high school students, that's when true friends come into our lives in our country.
how about your country?
>> CORRECT!
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