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The famous cartoon in Korea is so many things in there but Spongebob is also famous in Korea

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Watching cartoons are good for kids because many cartoons for kids teach valuable lessons about honesty, kindness, and other important character traits. By watching these lessons unfold on screen, kids can learn how to be better people in their own lives.~ Teacher QUENNY..
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Yes i like to watching cartoon.
>>Yes,  I like to watch cartoons. 
The famous cartoon in Korea is so many things in there but Spongebob is also famous in Korea
>> There are many famous cartoons in South Korea and Sponge Bob is one of the most famous cartoons in our country. 

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Yes i like to watching cartoon
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