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Are you optimistic or pessimistic about artificial intelligence technology?

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What we do routines will be replaced by what AI does. We can reduce many works at home, and at work. However, This technology is going to enable the upper management to run the company with a small number of people, which leads to a lot of layoffs, let alone a decrease in new recruits. More importantly, the development of AI technology looks beyond our control. No one can dare to imagine how much this technology will change our lives. As a matter of fact, this is the reason why I feel uncomfortable, or even frightened about it.

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            Are you optimistic or pessimistic about artificial intelligence technology?

What we do routines will be replaced by what AI does. 
>> What we do are simply routines and will eventually be replaced by AI. 
>> OR: Repetitive jobs can be performed by AI. 
>> [NOTE: I I'm not sure if Iunderstood your sentence correctly. ]

We can reduce many works at home, and at work. 
>> OR: It eases the workload at home and in the workplace. 

However, This technology is going to enable the upper management to run the company with a small number of people, which leads to a lot of layoffs, let alone a decrease in new recruits. 
>> OR: That being said, this technology can facilitate the displacement of occupations, which can lead to an increase in unemployment. 

 More importantly, the development of AI technology looks beyond our control. 
>> OR: Above all else, considering the current development of the said technology, studies suggest that humans won't be able to control superintelligent AI.  

No one can dare to imagine how much this technology will change our lives. 
>> OR: The changes that a superintelligent AI can bring about are far beyond human comprehension. 

As a matter of fact, this is the reason why I feel uncomfortable, or even frightened about it.
>> OR: I have to admit that this gives me the feeling of unease and terror at the same time. 

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