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작성자: 권*진
2023-02-28 396

회원님의 영작문

I usually enjoy meeting new people and interact with them. Since I am an extrovert, I like to make friends. However, when it comes to be comfortable with a new person, it differs a lot whether he is or she is be familiar or not. If I meet someone who has similar character with me, it takes short time to be comfortable. I can lead and continuously talk with him. On the other hand, if he has different perspectives from me, it usually takes a little more time to feel at ease. This is because it is not easy to interact and communicate with him and totally empathize with the emotions that he feels. Therefore, I need more time and efforts to sympathize with him.
Also, it differs whether he and I have similar interests or not. As the topics that I can talk are various, I can feel more comfortable whenever I am with him. For example, I feel ease when I meet people who like jazz music. Because I can easily talk with them about the theme.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Ye Jin,


Thank you for answering your homework.

One of the greatest, absolutely free treasures is interacting with other people. It is one of the most essential and fundamental needs of a human being. We are fueled by people who make us feel valued and wanted. Even though it might feel a little awkward at first, it might help you gain confidence, which is a huge benefit. Often, the highlight of a day is meeting someone new who makes you laugh, think differently, or just feel good.

 

~Teacher Cathy

 

I usually enjoy meeting new people and interact with them.

>> I usually enjoy meeting new people and interacting with them.

Since I am an extrovert, I like to make friends.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Since I am an extrovert, I like making new friends.

However, when it comes to be comfortable with a new person, it differs a lot whether he is or she is be familiar or not.

>> However, when it comes to being comfortable with a new person, it differs a lot from whether he or she is familiar with me or not.

If I meet someone who has similar character with me, it takes short time to be comfortable.

>> If I meet someone who has a similar character as me, it takes a short time to be comfortable.

I can lead and continuously talk with him.

>> CORRECT

On the other hand, if he has different perspectives from me, it usually takes a little more time to feel at ease.

>> CORRECT

This is because it is not easy to interact and communicate with him and totally empathize with the emotions that he feels.

>> CORRECT

OR >> This is because it is not easy to interact and communicate with him and completely empathize with his emotions.

Therefore, I need more time and efforts to sympathize with him.

>> Therefore, I need more time and effort to sympathize with him.

Also, it differs whether he and I have similar interests or not.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Also, it differs whether we have similar interests or not.

As the topics that I can talk are various, I can feel more comfortable whenever I am with him.

>> As the topics that I can talk about are various, I can feel more comfortable whenever I am with him.

For example, I feel ease when I meet people who like jazz music.

>> For example, I feel at ease when I meet people who like jazz music.

Because I can easily talk with them about the theme.

>> CORRECT

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