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I like to go amusement park anytime
I like a ride something but i hate long line

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Hi Henry, 
Theme parks or Amusement Parks are great places to make some long-lasting, unforgettable memories with your family and friends. With endless photo opportunities available across theme parks and so many fun rides and arcades to have fun in, you'll be treasuring these memories for a really long time. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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I like to go amusement park anytime
>> I like to go to amusement parks anytime. 
I like a ride something but i hate long line
>> I like the rides in an Amusement Park but I hate it when there's a long line. 
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