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Do you think animal testing should be banned? Why or why not?

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Yes. It's because nowadays, many species of animals are disappointing and endangered because of animal testing and pollution of environment. It is very serious situation. And some medicine is good for animals when they tested, but for human, it causes diseases. So it always not exact. We can't believe about the result of the animal test.

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Hi, Daisy. 
I agree that animal testing should completely be stopped and be made illegal. 
Animals have feelings too. They feel pain and also get hurt just like humans do. 
I hope you're having an awesome Monday afternoon. 
See you in class tonight. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Yes. 
>> Yes, it should be banned. 
It's because nowadays, many species of animals are disappointing and endangered because of animal testing and pollution of environment. 
>> It's because nowadays, many species of animals are disappearing and become endangered because of animal testing and pollution of the environment. 
It is very serious situation. 
>> It is a very serious situation. 
And some medicine is good for animals when they tested, but for human, it causes diseases. 
>> In addition, some medicines are good for animals when they are tested but causes diseases for humans. 
So it always not exact. 
>> So, it is always not exact. 
We can't believe about the result of the animal test.
>> We can't just solely rely on the result of animal tests.
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