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Who do you think is responsible for lost parcels? The deliveryman, the sender, or the receiver? Why?

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I think that happening was a accident. But If I should pick just one who is responsible, I think it is because of the deliveryman.
Because even though I wrote a correct address, he delivered to another place. (same buliding, but different entrance)
And when he called me, I said put it in the mailbox, but he didn't.
Anyway the everything is okay, and my fault is big too.
So I will never use a delivery service but the formal postal service.

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Happy Monday, Ian!
This is also an issue here in our country when it comes to delivery because some, not all, deliverymen don't really care about the packages that they deliver. They care more about speed because they can earn more if they will be able to deliver as many packages as they can in a day.
- T. Caitlyn
I think that happening was a accident. But If I should pick just one who is responsible, I think it is because of the deliveryman. Because even though I wrote a correct address, he delivered to another place. (same buliding, but different entrance)
>> I think that incident was unintentional but if I should pick just one who is mainly responsible, I think it is the deliveryman because even though I wrote the correct address, he delivered it to another place; The same building but a different entrance.
And when he called me, I said put it in the mailbox, but he didn't.
>> And when he called me, I told him to put it in the mailbox but he didn't.
Anyway the everything is okay, and my fault is big too.
>> Anyway, everything is okay now but I am also at fault.
So I will never use a delivery service but the formal postal service.
>> So instead of using a delivery service in the future, I'd rather use the formal postal service.
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