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Can you talk about three things you like about yourself?

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First the thing that I like is a punctuality. I've always been keeping it ahead of time. So I can show my respect for other people even if It may take some time. Second it's an industrious. It's easy to set up a goal, but not all the people can make it. For me I don't care no matter how long it takes, I have to make it. And last one is the heart of enduring a crisis. I don't think there will be only good things in my life. There will be good and bad things through my life. When I faced bad things, I have a strong heart to be patient and overcome it.

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Fabulous Monday, Elic! Utilize every moment to prepare your mind and body for future endeavors. Succeeding in life is easy as long as you believe in yourself. Trust yourself, and success will come along.

First the thing that I like is a punctuality.
>> The first thing I like about my self is I am punctual.
I've always been keeping it ahead of time. So I can show my respect for other people even if It may take some time.
>> I am always ahead of time so that I can be a good example to other people.
Second it's an industrious. It's easy to set up a goal, but not all the people can make it.
>> The second thing I like about myself is I am industrious. It is easy to set a goal but not all people can do it.
For me I don't care no matter how long it takes, I have to make it.
>> For me, I don't care no matter how long it takes to reach my goal.
And last one is the heart of enduring a crisis.
>> The last one I like about my self is I have a good heart.
I don't think there will be only good things in my life.
>> Those are the three things that I like about myself.
There will be good and bad things through my life.
>> I have experienced a lot of good and bad things in life.
When I faced bad things, I have a strong heart to be patient and overcome it.
>> Whenever I have a problem, I know I can overcome it because I am patient and I have a good heart.
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