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In my opinion, the best christmas is every years. Because I appreciate spend christmas annually with my family.

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Happy Friday, Sae Bom! 

Christmas is, indeed, a magical festival that is all about sharing joy and happiness. For this reason, it is also my most favorite festival. Apart from the religious beliefs, the festival is known as sharing gifts with family as well as friends. The cute kids wait for the whole year to receive gifts from Santa. 

- Kristine ^^ 


In my opinion, the best christmas is every years. 
>> In my opinion, Christmas is always the best for me.
Because I appreciate spend christmas annually with my family.
>> Because I love spending Christmas with my family every year.

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