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I think the good thing about Korea is the food
There are many traditional foods in Korea and they are good for health
Also Korean culture is good
But I think Koreans only know themselves
I dislike it

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Hi Henry, 
South Korea has been renowned for its globally influential pop culture, particularly in music K-pop, TV dramas K-dramas, and cinema, a phenomenon referred to as the Korean wave. You can also taste the delicious traditional food and various historical palaces and temples in our country. Korean cuisine is known for its healthy options. The cuisine contains fresh vegetables and fruits, lean meats, and low-fat dairy products. And  Korea also has a lot of beautiful islands, the most popular and largest one being Jeju Island. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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I think the good thing about Korea is the food
There are many traditional foods in Korea and they are good for health
Also Korean culture is good
But I think Koreans only know themselves
I dislike it
>>I think the good thing about South Korea is the food. 
There are various traditional foods in Korea and they are good for health. 
Also, Korean culture is good it offers a delightful combination of tradition and modernity.
But I think Koreans only know themselves and everyone is impatient in one way or another and that's what I dislike about Korean people. But Koreans consider their time very valuable. 

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There are many traditional foods in Korea and they are good for health
Also Korean culture is good
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