¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Do you like animated movies? Are they only for kids?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*ÅÂ
2023-02-23 782

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

No I don't think so.
These days, many animated movies are suitable for adults than kids.
For example, "The inside out" by Pixar said about growing of child and human.
it's expressed animated movie, but it's story for adults.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Thank you for sharing this JT!
Keep practicing so you can improve more.
Kelly^^
No I don't think so.
>> Correct
These days, many animated movies are suitable for adults than kids.
>> Correct
For example, "The inside out" by Pixar said about growing of child and human.
>> For example, "The inside Out" by Pixar talks about the growth of a child and human.
it's expressed animated movie, but it's story for adults.
>> It is an animated movie but the story is for adults.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
123174 Choose a novel and write something about it. ±è*À² ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 2562
123173 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 1
123172 homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 0
123171 Monday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 2071
123170 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 1
123169 Complete the sentences below with one of the following words: ½Å*°ü ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 1
123168 Traveling ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 2
123167 What is the funniest book you have ever read? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-24 2
123166 How does alcohol change your behavior, personality, and face? Àü*ä ¿Ï·á 2022-10-23 1687
123165 10.19.2022 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-23 1
123164 What are the advantages and disadvantages of attending concerts? ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-23 2
123163 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-23 1728
123162 Is there a food that you will never eat? ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-22 2
123161 Do you want to live in a posh area? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-10-22 0
123160 Hotel ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-22 1
123159 Why are gifts important in our life? ±è*À² ¿Ï·á 2022-10-22 2506
123158 Do you prefer to go to festivals alone or with others? ±è*À² ¿Ï·á 2022-10-22 1692
123157 Weekend ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2022-10-21 1390
123156 About the development of social networking sites. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-10-21 2178
123155 Do you want to be a Queen? Why or why not? ±¸*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-10-21 2512

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04