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1. (As I didn¡¯t know what I was supposed to do), I went to bed.
2. (When we reached home) we found water dripping down the walls.
3. She said (that she didn¡¯t trust me).
4. I don¡¯t know (why she is angry with me).
5. (Because he had lost his job), he was facing a lot of financial difficulties.
6. The child needed help (because he had lost his way).
7. I adopted the kitty (which was lying in the ditch).
8. (Although he tried hard), he was not able to find a good job.
9. The doctor gave him a tablet (so that he would be able to sleep better).
10. He talks (as if he knows everything).
~~Sweet dreams ~~

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Hello May!!!
Thank you for sending a very nice picture, it means a lot to me.
Take care and have a good day as well.

I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience. Nice job on your homework today, you are improving. Just persevere and you'll see yourself speaking the language well.

T. Jeny


1. (As I didn¡¯t know what I was supposed to do), I went to bed.
>>correct
2. (When we reached home) we found water dripping down the walls.
>>correct
3. She said (that she didn¡¯t trust me).
>>correct
4. I don¡¯t know (why she is angry with me).
>>correct
5. (Because he had lost his job), he was facing a lot of financial difficulties.
>>correct
6. The child needed help (because he had lost his way).
>>correct
7. I adopted the kitty (which was lying in the ditch).
>>correct
8. (Although he tried hard), he was not able to find a good job.
>>correct
9. The doctor gave him a tablet (so that he would be able to sleep better).
>>correct
10. He talks (as if he knows everything).
>>correct
~~Sweet dreams ~~
>>correct
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