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작성자: 윤*혜
2023-02-21 2715

회원님의 영작문

1. Everyone says that Neil has a heart of gold. = Neil is kind and generous.
2. She hardly ever asks for advice because she's so sure of herself. = she's so self-assured.
3. Nobody likes Bobby because he's so full of himself.= he's so self-confident.
4. Are you one of those people who always looks on the bright side? = people who always is optimistic.
5. Sometimes Arnie does the wrong thing, but he means well. = he doesn't mean to
6. Those cops who killed thousands of drug addicts have hearts of stone. = drug addicts are calm and firm
7. Jenny might be our youngest engineer, but she knows her stuff. = But she knows what she's doing
8. His boss said he was a waste of space and fired him = he was an annoying person and fired him
9. I moved overseas to show my family I could stand on my own two feet. = I could be independent.
10. My sister is known for giving her all when she plays sport = My sister is known trying as hard as she can when she plays sport.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Da Hye,

 

I really appreciate you taking the time to complete your homework. Understanding the importance of idioms in English language learning is important because they require a deeper familiarity with the English language to comprehend what someone means when they use them in conversation.

Although learning idioms may initially appear difficult, it can be fun. Because idioms are helpful, they give you a fresh and original way to express yourself. You could say, "You hit the nail on the head," which is a more interesting and complex expression, as opposed to "You're correct."

 

~Teacher Cathy

 

         

1. Everyone says that Neil has a heart of gold. = Neil is kind and generous.

>>CORRECT

2. She hardly ever asks for advice because she's so sure of herself. = she's so self-assured.

>>CORRECT

OR>> She’s so self-assured. (The first letter of a sentence is always capitalized.)

3. Nobody likes Bobby because he's so full of himself.= he's so self-confident.

>> Bobby is so self-centered.

4. Are you one of those people who always look on the bright side? = people who always is optimistic.

>> Are you one of those people who is always optimistic?

5. Sometimes Arnie does the wrong thing, but he means well. = he doesn't mean to

>> Sometimes Arnie does the wrong thing, but he has good intentions.

6. Those cops who killed thousands of drug addicts have hearts of stone. = drug addicts are calm and firm

>> Those cops who killed thousands of drug addicts are cruel and heartless.

7. Jenny might be our youngest engineer, but she knows her stuff. = But she knows what she's doing

>>CORRECT

OR>> Jenny might be our youngest engineer, but she knows what she's doing.

8. His boss said he was a waste of space and fired him = he was an annoying person and fired him

>> His boss said he was a useless person and fired him.

9. I moved overseas to show my family I could stand on my own two feet. = I could be independent.

>>CORRECT

OR>> I moved overseas to show my family I could be independent.

10. My sister is known for giving her all when she plays sport = My sister is known trying as hard as she can when she plays sport.

>> My sister is known for trying as hard as she can when she plays sports.

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