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[Writing Task] If you were a teacher, which subject would you like to teach? Explain your answer in 3 to 5 sentences. Use at least three (3) adjectives.

If I was a teacher, I will taught English.
It's because English is my favorite subject also English is very fun for me.
I will teach English to wise way.
For example, First I will teach about "why we learn to English"
This way will make students positive about learn English.

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Hello, Daisy!

Teaching is fun. You get the chance to observe your pupils develop their skills, achieve success in extracurricular activities, form enduring friendships, and learn new things about themselves. It's fantastic when students stay in touch since you can observe how they apply their abilities and skills.

Thank you for finding time to answer your homework. I've read it well.
Enjoy your trip to Taiwan. I will talk to you again on Wednesday!^^

Have a safe flight!

__T. Mayleen :)



If I was a teacher, I will taught English.
>>> If I was a teacher, I would teach English.
It's because English is my favorite subject also English is very fun for me.
>>> It's because English is my favorite subject, and English is very fun for me.
I will teach English to wise way.
For example, First I will teach about "why we learn to English"
>>> I will teach English in a wise way.
For example, first I will teach about "why we learn English."
This way will make students positive about learn English.
>>> This way, students will feel positive about learning English.
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