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i can explain the best 3 words is see, wait, write

작성자: 윤*혜
2023-02-17 856

회원님의 영작문

i can explain the first word 'see'. 'see' is i watching something, that like a person or food, book.
'see' is most beautiful word. i think this word is just saying what i can feeling, what can i watching like that, and can i explain some words.
second word is 'wait', 'wait' is using all time. i say my dog, family, friends, all of my lovers this word. because i think they should listen to me, and i think when i should help other. i use this word.
last word is 'write', 'write' is just i can doing now .
it can be a book or recipe and it will be another one. every one can this. every one doing tried once.
it sharing feeling, mood, acting, world views.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Da Hye,

 

I know you are so busy nowadays, but I am glad you have a time to answer your homework. Thank you for being a hard-working student. Your concentration while studying is genuinely remarkable. Instructing you was my true pleasure. Always sustain devotion and genuineness. I know that you can become exceptional. I wish you the best in your future!

 

~Teacher Cathy

 

i can explain the first word 'see'.

>> I can explain the first word, "see".

'see' is i watching something, that like a person or food, book.

>> "See" is when I watch something, like a person, food, or book.

'see' is most beautiful word.

>> "See" is the most beautiful word.

i think this word is just saying what i can feeling, what can i watching like that, and can i explain some words.

>> I think this word can make me say what I can feel, and what I am watching, and it can make me explain some words.

second word is 'wait', 'wait' is using all time.

>> The second word is "wait" and "wait" is used all the time.

i say my dog, family, friends, all of my lovers this word.

>> I say this word to my dog, family, friends, and all the people I love.

because i think they should listen to me, and i think when i should help other. i use this word.

>> Because I think they should listen to me, and when I should help others, I will use this word.

last word is 'write', 'write' is just i can doing now .

>> The last word is "write", "write" is just what I am doing now.

it can be a book or recipe and it will be another one.

>> It could be a book or recipe and it could be another one.

every one can this. every one doing tried once.

>> Everyone can do this. Everyone should try it once.

it sharing feeling, mood, acting, world views.

>> It shares feelings, moods, actions, and world views.

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