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Would you like to change your daily routine? Why or why not?

작성자: 류*선
2023-02-16 319

회원님의 영작문

I wouldn't like to change my daily routine. Even though it's not easy to live, I'm satisfied with my daily routine. I remember my busy daily routine in the last year. I did so many things. As a result, I was too exhausted. I really wanted to take some rest. At the end of last year, I started to get sick because of a bad cold. I couldn't do anything as different as the previous year. I tried to pray for recovery. But my lousy cold wasn't easy to recover from. I tried to keep praying and take some rest for recovery. While I was praying and taking rest, my daily routine was changed. When I had a hard time coughing, I felt very frustrated. Because It was very slow going toward my goals. However, God made my life very simply what I wanted through my hard time. Now I can focus on taking care of my girl and study counseling and English. If I wouldn't get sick, I couldn't stop my busy life by myself. Because I'm a very hard worker for everything. God knows me well. Thank you, Faith! :)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

It is good that you see the silver lining of your situation, Jane! Your faith in God is strong.-Faith-
I wouldn't like to change my daily routine. 
>> CORRECT
OR I would not like to change my daily routine. 
Even though it's not easy to live, I'm satisfied with my daily routine. 
>> CORRECT
OR Even though it is not easy to live, I am satisfied with my daily routine. 
I remember my busy daily routine in the last year. 
>> I remember my busy daily routine last year. 
I did so many things. 
>> CORRECT
OR I had a lot on my plate.
As a result, I was too exhausted. 
 >> CORRECT
I really wanted to take some rest. 
 >> CORRECT
At the end of last year, I started to get sick because of a bad cold. 
 >> CORRECT
I couldn't do anything as different as the previous year. 
>> I could not do anything different as the previous year. 
I tried to pray for recovery. 
 >> CORRECT
But my lousy cold wasn't easy to recover from. 
>> However, my lousy cold was not easy to cure. 
I tried to keep praying and take some rest for recovery. 
 >> CORRECT
While I was praying and taking rest, my daily routine was changed. 
 >> CORRECT
When I had a hard time coughing, I felt very frustrated. Because It was very slow going toward my goals. 
>> When I had a hard time coughing, I felt very frustrated because It was very slow going toward my goals. 
However, God made my life very simply what I wanted through my hard time. 
>> However, God made my life very simple which I wanted through my hard time. 
Now I can focus on taking care of my girl and study counseling and English. 
 >> CORRECT
If I wouldn't get sick, I couldn't stop my busy life by myself. Because I'm a very hard worker for everything. 
>> If I could not get sick, I would not stop my busy life by myself because I am a very hard worker for everything. 
God knows me well. 
 >> CORRECT
Thank you, Faith! :)
 >> CORRECT
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