¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ¹è*Çý
2023-02-14 431

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Hi~~
No. 7 is most difficult. Have a great day~

1. We may have to mobilize the reserves for  the invasion.
2. The angelic child is model of perfection.
Or The model of perfection is the angelic child.
3.The investors disapproved the proposed model of the shopping center.
4. We did only a moderate amount business today.
5. The new drug achieved some moderation of the pain.
6. His misrepresentation of the facts caused the trouble
7. He gave up trying to hit target  mised up three .
8. It is pouring and I have misplaced my umbrella.
9. I was misled by his respectable behavior.
10.The diplomat was sent on a great mission of secrecy.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello May,

Everyday is a challenge. We need to live with the challenges of life and in order for us to get through with it. We must learn our lessons first. then you will see yourself a  better and mature person.

T.Jeny


Hi~~
>>correct
No. 7 is most difficult. 
>>No.7 is the most difficult.
Have a great day~
>>correct
1. We may have to mobilize the reserves for the invasion.
>>correct
2. The angelic child is model of perfection.
Or The model of perfection is the angelic child.
>>The angelic child is a model of perfection.
3.The investors disapproved the proposed model of the shopping center.
>>correct
4. We did only a moderate amount business today.
>>correct
5. The new drug achieved some moderation of the pain.
>>correct
6. His misrepresentation of the facts caused the trouble
>>correct
7. He gave up trying to hit target mised up three .
>>After three missed he gave up trying to hit the target.
8. It is pouring and I have misplaced my umbrella.
>>correct
9. I was misled by his respectable behavior.
>>correct
10.The diplomat was sent on a great mission of secrecy.
>>correct
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
126016 I sometimes make food. ¿À*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 72
126015 Homework ¹Ú*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 0
126014 [Writing Task] What is the difference between studying at the... ¹Ú*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 1
126013 How to cook your own fascinating food ±è*À² ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 379
126012 Go back ±Ç*ÀÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 4
126011 Describe your dream dog in one sentence. ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 0
126010 Sunday, February 24th, 2022 ÀÌ*ÈÆ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 2
126009 What are the other benefits of learning another language at this... ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 2
126008 The major change in my life. ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-02-27 326
126007 The one thing I want to change ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 605
126006 Do you think animal testing should be banned? Why or why not? ±¸*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 565
126005 Describe the biggest surprise you have ever had in your life. ±¸*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 498
126004 Do you really need to have a college education to be successful?... ±¸*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 372
126003 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 618
126002 Who do you think is responsible for lost parcels? The... ¾ç*Àº ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 567
126001 What do you like the most about that holiday? ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 545
126000 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 906
125999 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-26 321
125998 [Writing Task] What things do you always need to bring when you... ¹Ú*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-25 1
125997 i had some bed storys:) À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-02-25 5

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04