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i study more hard in school. and i go to the university.
and i want to trip the wold as far as my feet can reach
also, i try eat some food all of the wold

and i want to see my puppy.
my puppy is hit the car in christmas, so from now i lost her.
i hope see her one more time,and i hug her for a while.
because i love her still now, i think she is my daughter and so cute puppy

so i can changing my life, i just want to see her living

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Hello Da Hye,

 

Thank you for entrusting me with your stories, even though sharing them will likely mean revisiting painful memories and experiences that almost certainly would be easier to avoid revisiting. I'm a pet lover, too, so I can relate to your story. I also lost my dog last year, and it hurts a lot. For us, a pet is not ¡°just a dog¡± or ¡°just a cat¡± but rather a beloved member of our family, bringing companionship, fun, and joy to our lives. So, when a cherished pet dies, it¡¯s normal to feel sad, shocked, or lonely. Exhibiting these feelings doesn't mean you are weak or your emotions are somehow misplaced. It just means that you're mourning the loss of an animal you loved, so you shouldn't feel ashamed.

 

~Teacher Cathy



i study more hard in school. and i go to the university.

I will study harder in school and go to a university.

and i want to trip the wold as far as my feet can reach

And I want to travel the world as far as my feet can.

also, i try eat some food all of the wold

Also, I will try to eat some food from around the world.

 

and i want to see my puppy.

And I want to see my puppy too.

my puppy is hit the car in christmas, so from now i lost her.

My puppy was hit by a car at Christmas, and now I will no longer have her.

i hope see her one more time,and i hug her for a while.

I hope to see her for one last time and hug her for a while.

because i love her still now, i think she is my daughter and so cute puppy

Because I still love her, and I think she was my daughter; she was a cute puppy.

so i can changing my life, i just want to see her living

So, if I can change my life, I want to see her alive.

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