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What is the dirtiest job you could think of? Why?

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I don't think it does not exist even working on dirty place. It's because all of the job's existence has their reason of that. For example, doctor always has operation every day so they have to see patient's blood and all of the organs. It may gross to see, but it is the job for save someone's life. So always we need doctors. Other jobs too. it doesn't exist dirtiest job in the world because we living now thanks to all of the job.

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Hello, Daisy. ^^
I agree that there are a lot of jobs that are considered to be dirty but they all have a purpose. 
I also agree that without them, we will have a hard time living life. 
In my opinion, all jobs are important and it doesn't matter whether they are clean or dirty. 
I hope you're doing great sweetie. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

I don't think it does not exist even working on dirty place. 
>> [Do mean]: I don't think it does not exist even while working in the cleanest place possible. 
It's because all of the job's existence has their reason of that. 
>> It's because all jobs' existence have reasons. 
For example, doctor always has operation every day so they have to see patient's blood and all of the organs. 
>> For example, doctors always perform operations every day so they have to see their patients' blood and all of their organs. 
It may gross to see, but it is the job for save someone's life. 
>> It may be gross to see, but it is part of their job to save someone's life. 
So always we need doctors. 
>> We always need doctors. 
Other jobs too. 
>> Other jobs are necessary too. 
it doesn't exist dirtiest job in the world because we living now thanks to all of the job.
>> There's no such thing as the dirtiest job in the world because we are living a comfortable life thanks to all of those jobs. 
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