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If countparts use thechnology which is invented by one company and resgister it as their patent, it should be punished. That is reason why there is a law about intellectual property right. Samsung has its unique panel for smartphone that should not be used by other companies. If someone break the law, they have to be imposed a huge amound of penalty from the international court. However, it is really difficult to win a suit because there are a lot of companies and countries which is connected with their profits. Although, it is not easy to get a result, companies have to raise the issue and sue it to the court to protect themselves. Even in Korea, there are a lot of nonauthorized service center which provide major service with fake parts. As a customer, I try to find the cheapest place to fix my items, because original parts are usually more expensive than private center. I am not sure if private center use original parts, but its performance has proved by a lot of users, so many peopl

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


If countparts use thechnology which is invented by one company and resgister it as their patent, it should be punished. 
>> If count parts use technology which is invented by one company and register it as their patent, it should be punished. 
That is reason why there is a law about intellectual property right. 
>> That is the reason why there is a law about intellectual property right. 
Samsung has its unique panel for smartphone that should not be used by other companies. 
>> CORRECT! 
If someone break the law, they have to be imposed a huge amound of penalty from the international court.
>> If someone breaks the law, they have to be imposed a huge amount of penalty from the international court.
However, it is really difficult to win a suit because there are a lot of companies and countries which is connected with their profits. 
>> However, it is really difficult to win a lawsuit because there are a lot of companies and countries which are connected to their profits. 
Although, it is not easy to get a result, companies have to raise the issue and sue it to the court to protect themselves. 
>> CORRECT! 
Even in Korea, there are a lot of nonauthorized service center which provide major service with fake parts. 
>> CORRECT! 
As a customer, I try to find the cheapest place to fix my items, because original parts are usually more expensive than private center. 
>> As a customer, I try to find the cheapest place to fix my items, because the original parts are usually more expensive than private centers.
I am not sure if private center use original parts, but its performance has proved by a lot of users, so many peopl
>> I am not sure if private centers use original parts, but its performance has proved by a lot of users, so many people get deceived because people can only use it for more than a couple of months, then it stops working again until you change its parts again. It's a waste of time and money, so people buy a new one instead of having it fixed.
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