¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¿ì
2023-02-05 396

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Hello, T.Donna.
Did you enjoy your weekend?
Actually, I didn't.
Last Saturday, I mean yesterday, I met an accounting officer who worked with us for about 6 years.
Dr. MJ and I decided to change the officer, because we didn't think he has a good ability to save our tax.
And I took a role to tell him that we wanted to stop the contract between him and us.
In fact, He was not only working partner, but also my friend.
So, I was so sad about it.
We drank together, and said that we will keep our relationship nontheless we finish our contract.
And there was one more bad thing.
I argued with my wife; actually I was so disappointed with her about growing our daughters.
I told her many times that I really want my daughters to greet with me when I go to work and come home.
However, she let my kids just sleep when I go to work yesterday morning.
That's why I was so mad and I stayed my room all weekend alone.
Without my family, I can't recover my energy.
So sad weekend, isn't it?
See you.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi there, Dr. Kim!

You have so much to take recently. I wish you had a very good weekend, but it seems like you had a long and an alone time to think about work and family matters. After this, you will feel so much lighter and better.  While it is true that pain can make us stgronger, first, pain makes us weak. 

Meeting and terminating the contract with your accountant friend must be hard but you have to do it. By this time, you have mastered the art of letting go (of employees and associates).  Being ready to the impact of this scenario is difficult so when you go home, just always remind yourself that as you go home, your family loves you no matter what happens at work. But, what happens when family is also a source of stress? Sometimes, when it rains, it pours. This means that it's raining problems all at once. Now, self-control and anger-management are practiced by most successful people. We cannot control the situation sometimes. However, we can control our reaction and behavior around us. This value separates man from all the other species- the ability to choose. It is not easy but love, kindness, and patience go a long, long way and keep healtheir relationships.

I wish you good luck in your choices, reactions, and social dealings this Monday. When in doubt, you can always pray to start and set your day ablaze. 

I am grateful that locking inside your room included composing your homework. Below, most sentences are correct. Some sentences have suggestions that you can study to analyze the accurate use of 'the'a nd 'a' as well as verb tenses, among others.

I wish you wisdom and peace this Monday. Stay calm and see you then!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

Did you enjoy your weekend?
>> Correct!

Actually, I didn't.
>> Correct!

Last Saturday, I mean yesterday, I met an accounting officer who worked with us for about 6 years.
>> Correct!

Dr. MJ and I decided to change the officer, because we didn't think he has a good ability to save our tax.
>> Correct!

And I took a role to tell him that we wanted to stop the contract between him and us.
>>  And I took the role to tell him that we wanted to stop the contract between him and us.

In fact, He was not only working partner, but also my friend.
>>In fact, he was not only our working partner, but also my friend.

So, I was so sad about it.
>> Correct!

We drank together, and said that we will keep our relationship nontheless we finish our contract.
>> We drank together, and said that we will keep our relationship nontheless, we finished our contract.

And there was one more bad thing.
>> Correct!

I argued with my wife; actually I was so disappointed with her about growing our daughters.
>> Correct!

I told her many times that I really want my daughters to greet with me when I go to work and come home.
>> Correct!

However, she let my kids just sleep when I go to work yesterday morning.
>> Correct!

That's why I was so mad and I stayed my room all weekend alone.
>>That's why I was so mad and I stayed in my room all weekend alone.

Without my family, I can't recover my energy.
>> Correct!

So sad weekend, isn't it?
>> It's a sad weekend, isn't it?

See you.
>> Correct!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
125008 Homework ¼Û*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-01-20 4
125007 My best ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-01-20 711
125006 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-20 1
125005 What new activity would you like to try doing in your free time? Àå*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-01-20 676
125004 Homework ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-01-20 659
125003 What\'s your favorite plant? Why? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-20 0
125002 If you were to evaluate yourself as a student of your current... ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-01-20 3
125001 E-sport? ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 2
125000 How did you understand the sentence, \"We can now hear people... ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 3
124999 I can ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 537
124998 What\'s your thought on students forming cliques in school? ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 2
124997 What makes you a good friend? Give examples. Explain. ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 4
124996 Homework from the Feedback ¹Ú*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 459
124995 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 440
124994 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 433
124993 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 391
124992 Why are many people afraid of insects? ÅÂ*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 527
124991 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 2
124990 What do you worry about getting older? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 701
124989 If you created a charity what cause would you focus on? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2023-01-19 463

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04