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Q: What do you think of hunting? Would you eat an animal that you hunted yourself?
A: I think hunting is considered not right. However, we have to eat it because we have to gain energies by that. I will not eat an animal that I hunted myself, but I will sell it and buy the other one.

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I agree, Zoe. Hunting can be seen as an act of animal cruelty, but we have to accept the fact that humans are naturally omnivorous, which means that we consume both plants and animals. :)
~T.Harmony <3

I think hunting is considered not right. 
>>CORRECT!
OR >> I think hunting is not considered to be right.
However, we have to eat it because we have to gain energies by that.
>> However, we have no other choice but to still eat it because we can gain energy and protein from them. 
I will not eat an animal that I hunted myself, but I will sell it and buy the other one.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> ...and buy a different one.
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