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What did you realize after all the preparations you have made as a liturgist?

작성자: 류*선
2023-02-03 930

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When I made all the preparations as a liturgist, I realized that growing my English skills. I didn't have many expectations of my growth before. Its process is really meaningful for me, but it was quite stressful. As much as has bigger stress, I could more focus on my tasks. I didn't have enough my own time to practice because I usually spend time with my daughter. So I tried to practice every moment with prayer. I am proud of myself. I felt achievement through this process. And also, I am grateful to keep in mind the Bible scripture reading. Probably I read this almost one hundred times this scripture. It does mean simply reading the Bible. While I'm reading the Bible scripture, I could think of Jesus' heart. my coughing still bothers me. Fortunately, I can't forget prayer because I have a tough time. I trust God who is perfect. I'm looking forward to reading the Bible in front of people. I will remember that what I show people is not me, but God. God will work it. Thank you!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I also believe that in every challenge, there is a new learning, Jane! I hope it is just the beginning. Be well!-Faith-
When I made all the preparations as a liturgist, I realized that growing my English skills. 
>> When I made all the preparations as a liturgist, I realized that my English skills have grown. 
I didn't have many expectations of my growth before. 
>> CORRECT
Its process is really meaningful for me, but it was quite stressful. 
>> CORRECT
As much as has bigger stress, I could more focus on my tasks. 
>> As I have bigger stress, I could focus more on my tasks. 
I didn't have enough my own time to practice because I usually spend time with my daughter. 
>> I did not have my own enough time to practice because I usually spend my time with my daughter. 
So I tried to practice every moment with prayer. 
>> Therefore, I tried to practice every moment with prayer. 
I am proud of myself. 
>> CORRECT
I felt achievement through this process. 
>> I felt my achievement through this process. 
OR This process made me feel fulfilled.
And also, I am grateful to keep in mind the Bible scripture reading. 
>> Also, I am grateful to keep the Bible scripture reading in mind. 
Probably I read this almost one hundred times this scripture. 
>> Probably, I read this scripture almost one hundred times. 
It does mean simply reading the Bible. 
>> It does not mean simply reading the Bible. 
While I'm reading the Bible scripture, I could think of Jesus' heart. my coughing still bothers me. 
>> While I am reading the Bible scripture, I could think of Jesus' heart, but my coughing still bothers me. 
Fortunately, I can't forget prayer because I have a tough time. 
>> Fortunately, I cannot forget the prayer because I have a tough time. 
I trust God who is perfect. 
>> CORRECT
I'm looking forward to reading the Bible in front of people. 
>> CORRECT
I will remember that what I show people is not me, but God. God will work it. 
>> I will remember that what I show people is not me, but God, God will work for me. 
Thank you!
>> CORRECT
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