¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Digital currency lead people to creditor.

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¼ö
2023-02-03 593

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Digital currency lead people to creditor.
because many people use Digital currency(bit coin).
but digital currency was premature to alternate real money.
government digital currency is safe but digital currency that made a private is caution.
result : Digital currency need precaution now.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi there Ari! It's true that digital currency is spreading in the whole world now. I just hope it will  accelerate the development of a better financial system. 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Digital currency lead people to creditors.
>>> CORRECT!
because many people use Digital currency(bit coin).
>>> Many people use Digital currency(bit coin).
but digital currency was premature to alternate real money.
>>> However, the digital currency was premature to alter real money.
government digital currency is safe but digital currency that made a private is caution.

result : 
>>> The government digital currency is safe but digital currency that is made privately is dangerous. 
result : Digital currency need precaution now.
>>> The result is digital currency needs precautions now.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
126100 3/1 homework ÃÖ*º½ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 498
126099 Homework ¿À*ºó ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 1
126098 The character ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 428
126097 2023-2/28 HOMEWORK ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 475
126096 Sun ÃÖ*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 1140
126095 Peanut Rice Wine ÀÌ*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 479
126094 homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 2
126093 Crystal ÃÖ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 399
126092 White lies are still classified as lies. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 814
126091 home work ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 625
126090 homework 2.28 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 403
126089 homework ¹Ú*°æ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 570
126088 Why payment method is important? ÀÓ*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 671
126087 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 1
126086 homework ½Å*Çö ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 3
126085 I hate liars. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 526
126084 Have you ever been in a difficult situation while traveling? Á¤*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 417
126083 favorite word ¹Ú*¶÷ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 386
126082 Would you prefer to live in a house or an apartment Á¤*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 616
126081 Homework Àü*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2023-02-28 535

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04