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Which is better, studying in a private school, public school or homeschooling?

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I want to study in a private school. It's because private school's infra is better than public school. And it has a lot of potential to send many students to good university. Also, there make atmosphere of students's studying hard. So it makes me to study harder and go to good university. In Korea, we think a private school is better than public school and homeschooling it's because homeschooling doesn't have effectiveness and public school is little bit hard to go to good university.

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Good afternoon Daisy. ^^
I think education is generally very important for Koreans and I understand why they're willing to invest in a good school. 
I agree that studying in a private school has a lot of benefits. :)
Anyhow, I hope you're having a great day. 
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

I want to study in a private school. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because private school's infra is better than public school. 
>> It's because a private school's infra is better than a public school. 
And it has a lot of potential to send many students to good university. 
>> In addition, it has a lot of potential to send many students to a good university. 
Also, there make atmosphere of students's studying hard. 
>> Also, the create an atmosphere for students to study hard. 
So it makes me to study harder and go to good university. 
>> So, it will make me study harder and go to a good university. 
In Korea, we think a private school is better than public school and homeschooling it's because homeschooling doesn't have effectiveness and public school is little bit hard to go to good university.
>> In Korea, we think a private school is better than a public school and homeschooling because homeschooling doesn't have effectiveness and it's a bit hard to go to a good university if you're from a public school.
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