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Is it rude to tell the person that they need to improve their appearance? Why or why not?

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Yes, I think it is so rude. It's because if we say them need to improve their appearance, they will get scar of it. And it is not manner for the other party. If it is too much, it will be a fight with them. And when I saw an article and tv programs, some people was gotten contempt for appearance by people, they filed a lawsuit for defamation of character. So we need to learn about manner even now.

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Hi, Daisy. 
A pleasant afternoon to you. ^^
It is true that it's not polite to tell someone to improve his/her appearance. It will not only emotionally hurt the person but it will fester the person psychologically as well. 
You're right when you said people should learn to be more polite and considerate. 
Anyhow, I hope you're doing great. See you later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Yes, I think it is so rude. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because if we say them need to improve their appearance, they will get scar of it. 
>> It's because if we tell them that they need to improve their appearance, they will get emotionally scarred from it. 
And it is not manner for the other party. 
>> [Do you mean]: In addition, it's not a good manner from the other party. 
If it is too much, it will be a fight with them. 
>> If it is too much, it will lead to a fight between the two of them. 
And when I saw an article and tv programs, some people was gotten contempt for appearance by people, they filed a lawsuit for defamation of character. 
>> I also saw an article and TV programs where some people received contempt from other people because of their appearance and they filed a lawsuit for defamation of character. 
So we need to learn about manner even now.
>> [Do you mean]: So, we need to be more polite. 
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