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IELTS book1 54p - Question1
; In my country, most days are sunny. And the gap betwwen day and night is quite high. But in winter, lots of cloud form and there are many snow days. So the temperature that we feel is lower about 3 to 5 degree Celsius than real temperature.

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~~ Teacher Sharon
In my country, most days are sunny. 
>> Correct
And the gap betwwen day and night is quite high. 
>> The gap between the day and the night is quite big. 
But in winter, lots of cloud form and there are many snow days. 
>> However, in winter, lots of clouds form and there are many snow days. 
So the temperature that we feel is lower about 3 to 5 degree Celsius than real temperature.
>> So the temperature reaches about 3 to 5 degrees Celsius which is colder than normal. 
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