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How do you deal with negative feedback?

작성자: 류*선
2023-01-31 615

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To be honest, I am afraid of negative feedback. I don't want to mistakes in front of people. It is my one of the obstacles is that to overcome negative emotions by myself. It is a very hard process. I can imagine when I got some negative feedback from people, I will obviously feel bad. However, I can learn how to control my emotions through them by myself. Hence, I often need to check my inner what I need or what should I do here and now. And then, I will think about people's intentions whether good or not. I might think about what is an important value of mine through these times. this process is that spiritually and mentally helps me. Above all, I will try to focus on the Holy Spirit. I believe that when I am weak, the Holy Spirit makes me strong. When I'm having a hard time, I ask the Holy Spirit why me? I really want to know the reason. Over time, I realize that the truth is God always loves me and helps me and protect me is far more important rather than that question. Thanks!! :)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

That's real, Jane! We are enlightened when God shows as the reason of our course. However, we cannot always get it, so we just have to keep trusting Him.-Faith-
To be honest, I am afraid of negative feedback. 
>> CORRECT
OR Sincerely, I am afraid of negative criticism.
I don't want to mistakes in front of people. 
>> I do not want to make mistakes in front of people.
It is my one of the obstacles is that to overcome negative emotions by myself. 
>> It is one of the obstacles to overcome negative emotions by myself. 
It is a very hard process. 
>> CORRECT
I can imagine when I got some negative feedback from people, I will obviously feel bad. 
>> I could imagine when I got some negative feedback from people, I would obviously feel bad. 
However, I can learn how to control my emotions through them by myself. 
>> CORRECT
Hence, I often need to check my inner what I need or what should I do here and now. 
>> Hence, I often need to check my inner self about what I need or what I should do here and now. 
And then, I will think about people's intentions whether good or not. 
>> Also, I will think about people's intentions whether good or not. 
I might think about what is an important value of mine through these times. 
>> CORRECT
this process is that spiritually and mentally helps me. 
>> CORRECT
OR This process helps me spiritually and mentally. 
Above all, I will try to focus on the Holy Spirit. 
>> CORRECT
I believe that when I am weak, the Holy Spirit makes me strong. 
>> CORRECT
When I'm having a hard time, I ask the Holy Spirit why me? 
>> When I am having a hard time, I ask the Holy Spirit why He chose me.
I really want to know the reason. 
>> CORRECT
OR I really need Him to reveal the reason to me.
Over time, I realize that the truth is God always loves me and helps me and protect me is far more important rather than that question. 
Over time, I realized that the truth is God's love, help, and protection is far more important than that question. 
Thanks!! :)
>> Thanks! :)
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