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The actors make the movie great. Because no matter how bad the cinematography is, if the actors act well, the movie will be fun. No matter how beautiful the visuals are, if the actors can't act, it will be a boring movie.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The actors make the movie great. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because no matter how bad the cinematography is, if the actors act well, the movie will be fun. 
>>> Because no matter how bad the cinematography is, the movie will be fun if the actors act well.

No matter how beautiful the visuals are, if the actors can't act, it will be a boring movie.
>>> No matter how beautiful the visuals are, it will be a boring movie if the actors can't act.
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