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What did you do last weekend? What will you do this weekend? Do you have specific plans?

작성자: 박*정
2023-01-31 557

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I usually spend my weekend with my family because, during weeks I and my husband always are chased by daily schedule and work, we don’t have good enough time together.
Anyway, on the last Saturday, It was my little daughter’s first ballet day. She wears a cutie ballet dress and shoes. At first time, she arrived there she looked like very interested. I think all stuff was new to her and everything made her to be curious. As beautiful teacher showed and started the class with the happy song, my little girl was tension up and tried to follow her new teacher. Something interesting is we met her kindergarden classmate there. He joined class little late, but my little girl recognized him right away she saw him and called his name. After over the class, we had a lunch very near restaurant, but she ate only three spoon and fell asleep away. She might be tired due to new class day but she really like that time so, we will plan to there on every Saturday.
Even we registered the next period class

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Congratulations to you and your daughter, Angie! You must also feel excited for your daughter. Enjoy it!-Faith-
I usually spend my weekend with my family because, during weeks I and my husband always are chased by daily schedule and work, we don’t have good enough time together.
>> I usually spend my weekend with my family because during weekdays, my husband and I always are chased by daily schedule and work, so we do not have good and enough time together.
Anyway, on the last Saturday, It was my little daughter’s first ballet day. 
>> Anyway, last Saturday, it was my little daughter’s first ballet day. 
She wears a cutie ballet dress and shoes. 
>> She wears a cute ballet dress and shoes. 
At first time, she arrived there she looked like very interested. 
>> At first, when she arrived there, she looked very interested. 
I think all stuff was new to her and everything made her to be curious. 
>> I think all stuff was new to her and everything made her curious. 
As beautiful teacher showed and started the class with the happy song, my little girl was tension up and tried to follow her new teacher. 
>> As a beautiful teacher showed and started the class with a happy song, my little girl paid attention and tried to follow her new teacher. 
Something interesting is we met her kindergarden classmate there. 
>> Another interesting thing was that we met her kindergarten classmate there. 
He joined class little late, but my little girl recognized him right away she saw him and called his name. 
>> He joined the class a little late, but my little girl recognized him right after she saw him and called his name. 
After over the class, we had a lunch very near restaurant, but she ate only three spoon and fell asleep away. 
>> After the class, we had lunch very near the restaurant, but she ate only three spoons and fell asleep right away. 
She might be tired due to new class day but she really like that time so, we will plan to there on every Saturday.
>> She might be tired due to the new class, but she really liked that time, so already planned to go there every Saturday.
Even we registered the next period class
>> We even registered the next period.
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